Hi, The Ink Maiden~ , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  for "Invalid Item" .

First Impression: The description under the title aroused my curiosity. The first paragraph hooked me with Taylor feeling uncomfortable. The conversation between Dr. Adams and Taylor moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I like: I like the way the author includes the physical description of the doctor and the patient as part of the story's action.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this because of the interaction of the characters.




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