First Impression: This free verse poem describes someone with Dis-associative Identity Disorder. The speaker's emotions is expressed through the descriptions of the personalities in the mirror.
What I like: I like the use of different line lengths because it shows the emotions through both the rhythm and the length of the lines. I also like the lack of punctuation because it helps express the speaker's emotions.
Suggestions: I encountered no distraction.
Final Thoughts: Thank you for sharing this educational poem. It gives the reader some idea of how the disorder disrupts an individual's life. Write on.
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