First Impression: The main emotions of this poem are melancholy and sadness. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions forward at a good pace.
What I like: The sixth stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on leave and reprieve, which emphasizes the hopelessness that a depressed individual feels.
Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.
Final Thoughts: This poem does an excellent job of describing depression.
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