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 Life Sentence Open in new Window. [13+]
A Picture of Depression
by Jemm Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, Jemm Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Life SentenceOpen in new Window. for "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window..

First Impression: The main emotions of this poem are melancholy and sadness. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions forward at a good pace.

What I like: The sixth stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on leave and reprieve, which emphasizes the hopelessness that a depressed individual feels.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final Thoughts: This poem does an excellent job of describing depression.

Prosperous Snow WDC Power Review



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