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 Mental BULLY Open in new Window. [E]
Bully is done deliberately.
by komall Author Icon
Review of Mental BULLY  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, komall Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Mental BULLYOpen in new Window. for "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window..

First Impression: The quote at the beginning of this item hooked me. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while showing how mental bullies devastate an individual.

What I like: I like this simile, bully is like a virus that eats the brain of people, because it is fresh while describing the damage a bully does.

Suggestions: In this phrase, emotionally week, I suggest changing week to weak.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking item because of the subject.

Prosperous Snow WDC Power Review



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