First Impression: The quote at the beginning of this item hooked me. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while showing how mental bullies devastate an individual.
What I like: I like this simile, bully is like a virus that eats the brain of people, because it is fresh while describing the damage a bully does.
Suggestions: In this phrase, emotionally week, I suggest changing week to weak.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought provoking item because of the subject.
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