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First Impression: The first line hooks the reader with the internal rhyme on disagree and see. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of despair and hope forward at a good pace.

What I like: This is my favorite line because it emphasizes hope and faith.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .