Hi Soh ~ Luminousa ! I'm stopping into your port today to read and review your article "Musings of a Doodle Lover" in celebration of your account anniversary month!

I decided to read this piece today because I really enjoy reading non-fiction pieces and articles. In addition, you drew me in with the title and description of this piece because I wanted to know what your thoughts on your habit are. I am quite jealous of people who can draw because the skill is simply beyond me. My sister, mother, and grandfather are all artistic, and somehow, I was left behind Do you have any drawings of yours you can share?

I just noticed a few grammar things you might look at fixing. First, the line "Even the back pages of my class-work books contained scribbles." looks like it is accidentally on its own line. Should it be connected to the previous paragraph? Your words are in red, and my suggestions are in black after:

through its own volition through their own volition

I enjoy it for it gives some mindless occupation. I enjoy it because it gives my fingers a mindless occupation

graphing designing or such like. graphic designing or something similar

My favorite lines of yours are: "processed papyrus," "most of my books were eye-catching!," and "non-verbal creativity." Very interesting imagery and humorous too! Good work!

Thank you for sharing your writing! Have a happy account anniversary month!

Take care,
Emily

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