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 I Am Jellyfish Open in new Window. [ASR]
A dialogue only story featuring my addiction to WDC - written for "The dialogue 500"
by Jellyfish needs more hours Author Icon
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Review by Emily Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi-ho again Jellyfish needs more hours Author Icon! You know why I'm here ... *Up* *Up* *Wink*

*StarB* What a great interview! The interviewer melting at the end was a little cheesy, but they can be however you want them to be, right? Ha! It was such a reflective and personal piece, and really conveys your emotion about WDC. Very cool concept! The interviewer sounds so disapproving of WDC though! *Ha* LOL! Do they represent someone you know, perhaps? *Think*

*StarG* I only spotted one little typo: "tidying out that draw of a million bottles of nail varnish you have" -- "draw" should be drawer *Smile* Also, some of your sentences are missing the period at the end (paragraphs 1, 7, 22, and 25)

*StarB* Overall, your piece was a very fun read and I'm glad I stumbled across it! Your genres already fit so well with this piece, but I think it deserves the Comedy genre as well. Perhaps you could add this in the key words?

*StarG* Thank you again for sharing your writing! See ya around! - Emily

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