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Given: Mar 15, 2019 at 3:49am
Length: 666 Characters |
661 w/o WritingML
Dear Mad Boy,
Don't tell everyone, or I'll be out of a job -- but -- I agree. There is no better love than chocolate, and anyone who is pretending so is fooling themselves.
Thanks for giving the link to the original poem, I wasn't familiar with it before.
It gave me a laugh to see 'food'as the predominant genre, then 'love' -- you have your priorities right, Mad Boy!
The only thing I might change is the word 'cruelty', it sits sort of heavy in this otherwise light-but-serious poem. (I know people can be really mean, but 'cruel' takes it to the next level.)
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