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Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond Open in new Window. [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "April 29, 2019: Breakdown on I95" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon,

I am reviewing you for "I Write in 2019" Open in new Window..

Well, I did not know there was an I-95 near Las Vegas but I do identify with breaking down on the highway on a hot summer day. I think you captured the experience well in your senryu.

At first, I counted "temperature" as four syllables but can see how it could easily count as three.

That was the only small glitch I saw.

I like your poem. I like the layout with the poem being centered. I appreciate the author's note sharing the information about the contest and the prompt.

Well done!





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