Hello 🌑 Darleen - QoD ,

I enjoyed reading your emotional poem about self preservation.

Your use of storm symbolism worked really well with the self preservation concept in this poem of yours.

My favorite line was: "hidden beneath an umbrella of protection." Possibly because of the dual meaning but also probably because I could have used an umbrella earlier today to protect myself from actual rain. So it has extra meaning to me today. It also made me thing of the biggest umbrella I'd ever seen... it was so big you could probably hide a family of four under it. So better protection than the average. I thought your poem's umbrella deserved body armor kind of status.

Your poem is well done, flows nicely and evoked strong feelings. I wish I could give you/your character a big .

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

Thank you for sharing your heart-wrenching poem!

May love, joy, peace and light be yours in abundance!
PWheeler

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