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I Write In 2019 and 2024 to....  Open in new Window. [13+]
Lots of creative pursuits in 2019 and more in 2024 and beyond.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Blaze Of Glory" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello,

I'm Mastiff, and I'm going to review your work! I'm just an amateur, so take it all with a grain of salt, as it's just my opinions. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I appreciate being able to read it. Of course, this is part of the I Write 2019 contest, too.

*Vignette5* First impression:
Of course the first thing to do here is check the syllable count! I haven't slept but six hours in three days, but by my math, it's spot on! *Smile*

*Vignette5*Things That Might Make It Better:
I see what you went for, and I like the way you did it. It's by the nature of it quite short, but it came with a nice little punch, that whomever this is about has put in the time and effort and made a go. I hope the title is apropos!

*Vignette5*Mechanics:
I didn't find any problems here.

*Vignette5*Things I Like:
The scheme was interesting. The syllables 7/8/9, but then the poem went 3/5/5. I thought it an interesting choice.

*Vignette5* Final Comments:
Hard to write a whole lot on such a short piece, but we get what we get in this contest! I enjoyed it even in its brevity.

Happy Writing!

Mastiff Author IconMail Icon *Dog2*




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