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Regret and Sorrow Open in new Window. [13+]
I've been down the road of regret and sorrow
by 👼intuey Author Icon
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Review by Cat Voleur Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions.


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Thanks for submitting this piece to the MHWA Review Challenge!

This has been one of my favorites *HeartT*

I really like the abstraction of this one, the almost leaking of metaphors into reality.

But do
step over the liquid of black molasses
oozing and hovering around my feet.




The last stanza really highlighted your talent for imagery, and served as the perfect (albeit it very dark) conclusion to the piece. It hit all the right emotional tones.

The only thing that I'm not quite sure I understood was the formatting. The way that some words were spread out I felt like you were calling attention to them, but then again, I know that sometimes the auto-formatting can be a little weird for poetry, so I wasn't sure if it was intentional.

In terms of execution, the piece was flawless. Thank you so much again for sharing it!






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This review was done as part of the MHWA May Review Challenge to promote awareness about the group, and May being Mental Health Awareness Month.



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