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*Heartg* Theme/Subject Matter: This is about siblings remembering shared events differently.

*Heartt* Originality/Creativity: The conversation between the sibling emphasizes the difference in their memories of their mother, while moving the plot forward at a good pace.

*Heartg* Emotion/Impact: David's explanation of the difference in the memories of shared events makes sense, while emphasizing the emotional impact their mother had on both of them.

*Heartt* My Favorite Part: I like Marcie's question in the last paragraph, because it is a question that requires an answer Marcie may not like.

*Heartg* My Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, On her drove home, I suggest changing drove to drive.

*Heartt* Summary: I enjoyed reading this story because it shows that emotions have an effect on our memories.

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