\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4486618
Review #4486618
Viewing a review of:
 Mother Open in new Window. [13+]
My first memory
by Jaded La Morte Author Icon
Review of Mother  Open in new Window.
Review by Cat Voleur Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Under Construction: MHWA  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)

______________________________________________________________________



*AwarenessG* DISCLAIMER *AwarenessG*

I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions.


______________________________________________________________________




Hello,

This is another piece where you show what you can do with a limited amount of words. There isn't a lot of exposition or narrative, you've just taken the most painful bits of the story, allowing the reader to piece it together for themselves. There's something very compelling about that in your writing, a lot of the narrative comes in at the parts you haven't said - but I still feel like you're not holding anything back when writing. It's very natural, very unique, and undeniably compelling. It always leaves me wanting more.

For that reason, especially, I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

All the best,

Cat



______________________________________________________________________





This review was done as part of the MHWA May Review Challenge to promote awareness about the group, and May being Mental Health Awareness Month.



** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **





______________________________________________________________________




*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!Open in new Window..
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4486618