Hello!

It's probably weird to use the word "fun" to describe my experience reading this piece, given the subject matter, but I will say I enjoyed the experience from start to finish. I was very pulled in by your choice of words and the intriguing use of repetition, only to discover that it was a poetic form I'd never heard of. And discoveries like that are, for me, and for lack of a better word, fun.

In execution I thought the poem was flawless. Using a poetic form that's so centered around repetition to illustrate a thought process twisting slowly out of control was just such a brilliant idea - since thoughts are something that are also known for being very repetitive.

It was very effective as a whole, and I got to learn about a new kind of poetry. Thank you so much for sharing this piece, and for the helpful links!

I hope I get to read more from you soon.

Sincerely,

Cat




















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