Hello,

This was a very poignant piece.

I don't have any suggestions for it, because I think it's very powerful as is. I can't really imagine it being changed.

There's a strong narrative element, but at no point did you sacrifice emotional impact to tell your story, and the poem is just so full of character - which I think is perfect for a poem that's about finding your voice and being accepted as yourself.

I hope that writing this made you feel better, and I hope that you get through whatever life throws your way. Poetry can be such a strong outlet and it's something you have a clear talent for.

Thank you so much for sharing this, and making sure that it got reposted.

Sincerely,

Cat



















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