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*Heartg* Theme/Subject Matter: In this monologue the author talks about being ignored.

*Heartt* Originality/Creativity: The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace while describing the results of being ignored by everyone.

*Heartg* Emotion/Impact: The words chosen show the emotional impact of being ignored.

*Heartt* My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the description of the brother and how his actions affect the author.

*Heartg* My Suggestions: A type in this phrase, On the year 2000, I suggest changing On to In.

*Heartt* Summary: This is a good description of what being ignored can do to a person.

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