Hello!

This was a much darker piece than the other one of yours I reviewed, but I liked it.

You were able to develop a strong, narrative element in the poem, without ever truly revealing what it's about. That's a rare gift for a writer, and as the reader, I have to tell you that it makes for quite the interesting read.

It's easy to tell that this isn't to be taken literally, but I love how open to interpretation it is, in terms of the inspiration behind it.

This was well executed, ambiguous, and appropriately dark considering the emotional aspect.

Thank you so much for sharing it!

Sincerely,

Cat




















My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .