Hello!

Thank you so much for putting this on the request list, this was such a fascinating read.

I love the way that you formatted parts of the piece to physically illustrate your point, like with the word "dangling" and with the "click, click, click." It reminded me a lot of some of my favorite childhood poems (like those featured in Alice in Wonderland) although this had much darker undertones.

I love your approach to the prompt, and how in personifying an animal you chose to write about a stuffed one. It brought an entirely new aspect to the situation that was very compelling.

Thanks again for sharing this

-Cat




















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