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 The demons in my head Open in new Window. [E]
Anyone out there suffering from depression or anxiety. You're not alone.
by Summer Irons Author Icon
Review by Cat Voleur Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Under Construction: MHWA  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions.


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Hello!

Thank you for submitting this to our MHWA Review challenge. It was a very well-executed piece that illustrates what it's like living with depression and or anxiety. It was emotional, and able to put imagery to the feelings associated with these particular mental health challenges.

I also really appreciated in the item description, where you tell those people who are suffering that they're not alone. It was a nice touch, and a good way to shed some light on this issue with this dark piece of prose.

The one suggestion that I have for you is formatting based - in that it might be easier to read the piece if the font were a bit larger. Other than that, I think everything was perfect.

I hope that I get to read some more of your work soon.

Sincerely,

Cat







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This review was done as part of the MHWA May Review Challenge to promote awareness about the group, and May being Mental Health Awareness Month.



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