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 | The Empty  [ASR] The best way I can explain my depression  |
| (5.0)| ______________________________________________________________________  DISCLAIMER I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions. ______________________________________________________________________ Hello, This was a very dark (and I got the impression) a very personal piece, but it was well executed and I enjoyed reading it. I like how you personified emptiness as a sort of location, but did so in such a subtle manner. It was very effective, especially in a piece as short as this one. There was one line in particular that really stuck out at me, on that note: Nothing I do will ever fill the empty. If your goal was just to explain your depression (like it says in the description for the item) then I think you did a wonderful job. That doesn't necessarily mean that people who don't struggle with depression will be able to understand exactly - because that's quite a challenge, but I think this does a great job painting the picture. All the best, Cat ______________________________________________________________________ This review was done as part of the MHWA May Review Challenge to promote awareness about the group, and May being Mental Health Awareness Month. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ______________________________________________________________________  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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