Hello!

Thank you so much for submitting this lovely piece to the MHWA Review Challenge.

For as much as I know about poetry (which is not a lot, honestly) I feel like you've done a wonderful job. The meter was great, the rhyme scheme was consistent, and as a reader I really appreciated how you were able to convey the dark feelings behind your thoughts.

Of course, one of my favorite aspects of the piece is that you were able to bring a little bit of hope right there at the end, and in a way that I could really relate to. I think a lot of people on this site in particular can probably relate to writing being a source of solace in the darkest emotional times.

All in all, it was a very well done piece that I found myself really enjoying. Thank you again for sharing it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work for the challenge.

Sincerely,

Cat





















My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .