Hello again!

I really liked the concept behind this piece, of explaining about aches and pains. The opening line in particular really piqued my interest:



I thought the poem was going to be a little bit more about explaining the nuances between aches and pains through emotional examples. I was a little disappointed to see them just grouped together so often after that, but you went above and beyond in providing the examples.



Since the first half of the poem really focuses in on that difference, as mentioned before, I think it was the stronger half (or at least, the half that appealed to me, personally.) The second half had a nice message though, that I also really appreciated.



I hope that this review has been helpful in shedding light on the many strengths of this piece, as well as showing my perspective reading the piece. Thank you so much for sharing it!

Sincerely,

Cat















My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .