Hello,

This was a hard poem to read, but I think that's sort of the point.

It hurts to care about things like the homelessness crisis in America, because it's such a pressing issue that's so close to home. Being confronted with it is painful, especially when we know that we have it good at the moment.

You did a really good job expressing all of that, and shining light on an issue that a lot of people would rather just push aside and not think about. You raised good points, and I think this poem is the perfect reminder to be a good person.

Thank you so much for caring, for writing this, and for sharing it for the review challenge.

Sincerely,

Cat




















My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .