Hello,

This was such a sad, touching story.

You did a good job hitting all the right notes for a complex string of emotions that must go into putting a relative into a home, the guilt, the exhaustion, the doubt. You found the perfect balance of letting the protagonist feel all those things, while still painting the picture that it was the right decision.

The visit also was very moving, and for structural reasons I think it was a good call that it was a short visit. The story kept moving right along, and I think you did a great job with it.

Thank you so much for sharing it with the group for our Review Challenge.

Sincerely,

Cat




















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