Our primary characters here are two newly-wedded people honeymooning in the Moroccan Sahara. Characterization is fairly simple as the piece is so short. I still picked up on the general humor of the characters, and Chi's discomfort later in the story is somewhat telling of her.

There isn't a lot of dialogue but what there is comes off as natural and moves the story forward.

The real delight in this story is the use of setting. So much attention was given to description I absolutely was able to visualize the location which is wonderful because it's an exotic location. Some of the phrasing was downright poetic. I really felt like I was there.

Grammar and POV were flawless.

Ultimately, I don't have any suggestions for the story. It's a glimpse into a lovely moment between two people beginning the adventure of their lives.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .