Greetings. I am visiting your port and reviewing this poem as part of the August 2019 Week 1 Challenge for the Mental Health Writers Alliance group. I hope this review finds you well.

My feelings about your poem:
Rhyming every other sentence in this poem works very well for the flow of your poem. Your descriptions painted a moving picture in my mind as I read, making me want to read to the end. The last four lines of your poem were the strongest for me, showing that nature is riddled with lessons if one simply slows down and pays attention. I would not suggest a change in any part of this wonderful poem. Thank you for the enjoyable read and for sharing your unique view of nature! Keep on writing! - Jenn

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .