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Review #4500085
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Image Protector
Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond Open in new Window. [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "In the Heart of the Mountain" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Delight* Hiya Prosperous Snow! I am happy to review your piece as a participant in "I Write 2019." *Smile*

*Fire*The title is intriguing and drew my imagination! I liked it. I enjoy how you can create poems relating to your faith, especially this one in only 24 syllables. *Thumbsup* And I always learn new information about the Baha'i faith.

*Fire* Your key word totally fits the theme and set the background of the fortress. Wow! Thanks for the author's note, which is very useful if folks did not know your reference. Even without it, as I know you, I understood it had some historical reference to the Bab. *Wink* I wonder if you changed the 'HE" to "Bab" would clue folks in. Yet ...I see that in your note you used "the Bab" so it may not work. *Wink*

*Star*It was pleasant to read aloud and the image is vivid and tells us some of origin on his wisdom. Punctuation served the work as well. Thanks for continuing to share and honour this wisdom.

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