I like that you provided a backstory for the poem, but I believe you could've incorporated that information into your writing. The theme of refusing to move on when a friend already has is a relatable one, especially to me.

The structure of your poem is unique and creative. The last line is the most powerful as it provides the reader with an opportunity to reflect on themselves in relation to that question.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .