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First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the descriptions of the Ostress birds. The narrative moves the story forward, while giving telling about the Ostress birds/

What I like: I like the lesson this story gives about the importance of friendship.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion would be to use these birds and flowers in another story.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the birds and the flowers.




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