Hi, e.ronnie, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  for "Invalid Item" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Connie at the cemetery. The descriptions and background are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I like: I like the way the story ended because it suggested closure is always possible. I also like he way Connie followed through on finding Tim's family.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Connie.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .