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Good morning ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author IconMail Icon!

It's 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author IconMail Icon and I am here to review your wonderful wee poem as it fall before mine in the I Write in 2019 forum.

I am not certain of what a "mgur" poem is, but I enjoyed it. Your little extra bit at the bottom had me checking out https://www.herbcrafterstarot.com/tarot-blog/air just to see if I could learn more. I've been interested in getting a deck of some cards. I used to have ones, but have misplaced them - though I am more interested in using them to inspire my writing... which is what I believe you have done here. Lovely.

I love the alliteration of "steamy, sensual scent" and the title "Lavender Lady".
I also like the image of "devour(ing) this luxury" and "cherishing present moments".

The overall feeling was one of peace and though I could not smell the lavender, I got the impact of the image that still hangs in my head like its own cherished memory.
Thank you for sharing this and I wish you luck in the contest.
Happy Writing!!

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