Hello IceSkatingSugarCube ,

What a fun crochet-themed poem you have crafted here!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your lovely personal poetic tribute to the joys of crocheting (I don't crochet but I used to knit... crocheting is supposed to be easier but I never got past the chain stitch...all this is to say that I could relate to your love of needle craft, if not crochet in particular ).

Your poem is well done, flows nicely and evoked positive feelings in me as I read it. It brought me even more appreciation for yarn and needle crafting.

I am still learning about meter so can't comment on that but your syllable counts were perfect for your chosen form.

I liked your poem's rhyming.

My favorite line was: "A soft, yarny ploy!" What a wonderful way to end the poem. It was a tough choice though, because I really also loved the line, "Crochet makes me bold." It's amazing how being good at something can make us feel good about ourselves too.

What I loved most overall was your beautiful heart and sense of humor. You inspire me!

I liked how you structured your poem.

Thank you for sharing your fun poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!

PWheeler






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