Hi Keo_Shortstack,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with longing and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who dreams of being with the person they love, even though that is unlikely. I am hoping that the speaker can accept the reality of their situation completely and move on with their lives. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.