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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, Hullabaloo!
This is pretty darn good! I love how you used the contrast of the gloomy setting of the cemetery to how neat its caretakers try to keep it by mowing the grass and replacing the wilted flowers, and the way you eased into 'the longest night' and the 'shortest of days' was well done.
I also like the descriptions you used for these terpsichoreans (yeah, that's my new word for the day. Had to look up, though! *Bigsmile*)
Nice imagery, too!
I have a similar short free verse poem I wrote a few years ago if you'd like to check it out: "The Dance Of Dis" Open in new Window.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Hullabaloo! Thanks for sharing this, good luck in the contest, and have a frighteningly fabulous Halloween!

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