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| It is my pleasure to read your story and give you a review. Welcome to WDC! The story 'Zombie' is well told, and had it's chilling moments. Good job!  Reader's Reaction: When you mentioned the hunter appeared, I wasn't exactly clear on who the hunter is. Does he hunts Zombie's to keep them from doing harm to humans. If so, then I vouch for him because who likes Zombies? I know I sure don't! Characters/Dialog: The characters consisted of a homeless guy eating from the thrash, Zombies awakening from the dead on this certain day, Halloween. The atmosphere is well described, showing the difference between a normal day and something is terribly wrong night. Then there is the hunter, who scared away most of the zombies except one, who already feasted on the homeless guy's leg, making him stronger and less afraid.  Emotion/Mood/Atmosphere: The emotion shown is Afraid, Aggressive, Alarmed at what was happening. The homeless guy saw it all and reported the night of weirdness. The atmosphere (or mood) showed feelings well, as well as the descriptions of backgrounds.  Plot & Pace: The plot revolved around a question - What's the measure of man? The pace moves steadily, and I wasn't bored.  Structure - setting & Imagery: The narrative structure told a story that referred to dramatic action as the plot determined the key conflicts, main characters, setting and events. Favorite Lines: "And you do remember that dreadful night don't you? The one that came to us three years ago. A horrible evening, of which, I'll never forget, that had a sky that looked every bit like the Aurora Borealis except this sky, and I mean the whole darn thing, was a deep purple in color that had a tinge of scarlet red mixed in with it. The very same odd looking atmospheric condition, it was, that caused the decomposed bodies, that eventually transformed into zombies, to stir within their graves." Overall Impression/Conclusion: These lines describe the happening well, and it would have scared me seeing a sky such as this. Good job! I enjoyed reading this, even though confused by who the hunter is, and why was he brought into the story?The conclusion was interesting enough.  WriteOn!  Thank you for sharing your work with us! Jeannie☃️    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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