Hello there, Chibi! I thought this was pretty good! I see you wrote it for my "SCREAMS!!!" contest, but I don't see it entered. Anyway, I like the idea of this graveyard worker getting attacked by this mysterios 'goo', and considering how short it is, it turned out well. Well, maybe not so well for George. Your descriptions of the goo sticking to him and overtaking him reminded me a bit of that old horror movie, The Blob, and using the repetition of 'scrape, scrape, scrape' and 'scream, scream, scream' was a nice touch! Flawless spelling and grammar (thank you!), and the whole piece flowed smoothly. Well done, my friend! Kee ponw ritin gon, Chibi, and I hope to see more of your entries in "SCREAMS!!!" . You'll be a worthy adversary for bobturn and the other regulars!
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