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Ooey Gooey Open in new Window. [13+]
For the SCREAMS! contest.
by Chibithulu (Alyssa) Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, Chibi!
I thought this was pretty good! I see you wrote it for my "SCREAMS!!!Open in new Window. contest, but I don't see it entered.
Anyway, I like the idea of this graveyard worker getting attacked by this mysterios 'goo', and considering how short it is, it turned out well. Well, maybe not so well for George. *Laugh*
Your descriptions of the goo sticking to him and overtaking him reminded me a bit of that old horror movie, The Blob, and using the repetition of 'scrape, scrape, scrape' and 'scream, scream, scream' was a nice touch!
Flawless spelling and grammar (thank you!), and the whole piece flowed smoothly.
Well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Chibi, and I hope to see more of your entries in "SCREAMS!!!Open in new Window.. You'll be a worthy adversary for bobturn and the other regulars!


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