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 | The Silence Woke Her  [ASR] A young woman is woken up by her dog, but things aren't what they seem...  |
| (5.0)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Greetings, K.M. Baker! As one horror lover to another, I this was great! I'm also a big fan of surprise/twisted endings, so this was extra treat! The idea of this unnamed woman letting her pup out in the middle of the night and the letting him back in was good, but then to have her wake up to that unexplainable horror of seeing him hung up and 'massacred' was gruesome. But of course it was that terrifying ending that made this shine! Who, or what, did she let in?  Very well told, K.M.! The spelling and grammar was flawless, but I do have one suggestion: 'Once she left him in' (let?) Otherwise, bravo! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! It was an excellent story, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-I read your port intro, but you might also want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. (Painting creepy dolls? Nice! ) PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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