Hi Chris,
This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with vivid description. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on what is going on. They will read on. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your plot and main characters very well for the reader. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here.. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)The Hovertaks became a quite family that night and-Should read "The Hovertaks became a quiet family that night, and".

The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.