Hi AnxietyWritten,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion and fear. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is feeling threatened by unseen forces in a house they are used to being in. I am wondering if the speaker will find out if their anxiety is real or imagined. I read to the last word to find out. The haiku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. You have concentrated on the emotions of fear and confusion that the speaker is experiencing. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.