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 The Girl and the Bird Open in new Window. [ASR]
About a loving girl who meets a dying bird.
by Angelina Wilson Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Angelina,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a girl who finds a wounded crow and nurses it back to health. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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