Hi KidAwesome,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone full of feelings of isolation and curiosity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes the want to read on. The poem is about someone who experiences life and alone and all its pitfalls. I am hoping that the person in the poem finds a good life for themselves and someone to share it with. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The haiku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem concentrates on the emotions experienced by the person in the poem. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation here, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.