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Given: Dec 24, 2019 at 9:01am
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Happy Happy Christmas Eve Carly! I am happy to review your creation for 'I Write in 2019!" Keep on going! You can make it to 52!
I love songs and so your parody of "We Wish you a Merry Christmas" is so appealing! I could sing along though I kept tripping over the word "you" after "bring" in the chorus. Or the word "that". It seems to break the flow with one too many syllables. You could just drop one of the words. The second verse was not as flowy to sing as the first one and yet the details were stellar for the theme.
I had to look up the word Hogmanay! Interesting tradition. Cool. Maybe add a little note about it in a drop note. I like how you incorporated some of the Scottish New Year's traditions, especially "Auld Lang Syne"!
I had fun singing this cheery song on this Christmas Eve day and learned something! Thanks for your vision and may you have lots of luck and best wishes in the next decade! Keep writing.
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Happy Happy Christmas Eve Carly! I am happy to review your creation for 'I Write in 2019!" Keep on going! You can make it to 52!
I love songs and so your parody of "We Wish you a Merry Christmas" is so appealing! I could sing along though I kept tripping over the word "you" after "bring" in the chorus. Or the word "that". It seems to break the flow with one too many syllables. You could just drop one of the words. 
The second verse was not as flowy to sing as the first one and yet the details were stellar for the theme. 
I had to look up the word Hogmanay! Interesting tradition. Cool. Maybe add a little note about it in a drop note. I like how you incorporated some of the Scottish New Year's traditions, especially "Auld Lang Syne"! 
I had fun singing this cheery song on this Christmas Eve day and learned something! Thanks for your vision and may you have lots of luck and best wishes in the next decade! 
Keep writing.
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