Hi NorahMae,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone trying to concentrate and stay focused as they read poetry. I am wondering if the poetry is being read for a specific purpose, like a class, and if the speaker will get through it. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.