Hi RedBoots,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I was anxious to see what your next story would be about and started to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses is completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader a synopsis of your latest story. The reader is delighted with the look they get into your next project. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.