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Greetings, Scott Clauss!
This isn't bad for one of your first pieces on here. Granted it's not what some folks would write about, but that just makes you all the more unique.
You did a great job of writing this. You didn't go overboard with too much backstory and stuck to the main theme throughout. I'm also glad you didn't go overboard with the sexual descriptions! *Laugh*
I don't know if this based on a real experience or not, but I think you might be onto something here with the alcohol affecting your subconscious and bringing your dreams back after 5 years. Who knows? Maybe if DO set your alarm clock before drinks tonight your dream will have a better outcome? (No pun intended! *Bigsmile*)
Well done, my friend! The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), and the whole piece flowed smoothly!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Scott, thanks for the chuckles, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-I noticed you don’t have any Merit Badges yet. Click on My Account (on the left hand side) > Achievements, and then go back and check your email. You should have a few surprises waiting for you there! *Bigsmile* You only need to do this when you’ve reached certain ‘achievements’.
PSS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" Open in new Window. and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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