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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*

Hello again, Scott!
After reading that other piece, I saw this one and couldn't resist that title!
This is really, really good! And HILARIOUS!
I don't know why, but you're not the first person who's taken a jab at Frosty this year. There's always a few, but this year he seems to be everybody's favorite target for stories like this! Heck, I even had to jump in on it! "FROSTY'S WINTER WONDER LAND" Open in new Window. That was for a contest though, and the pic was the prompt.
I love how you used different lines for the original song to make your points, and as wild as it is, this makes a lot of sense! I'd use some examples, but I wouldn't know where to begin! Each paragraph was great!
I love your sense of humor, and your vocabulary and syntax for this was outstanding!
Bravo, Scott! Three thumbs up! *ThumbsUpL* *ThumbsUpL* *ThumbsUpL*
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for the laughs, and once again, welcome to WdC!
PS-You now have your 1st fan!
PSS-Here's another 300 Word FF about this criminal Frosty character I wrote a few years ago: "Frosty's Revenge?" Open in new Window.

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Angus Hand


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