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 A Bear in a Storm Open in new Window. [E]
A fable in poetic form
by FireWriter2012 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello there, FireWriter!
I'm no expert on poetry (mainly because I don't understand them most of the time!), but I thought this was good for one of your first pieces on here. I know it's a little short, and it has a sort of Yogi Bear flavor to it ('not your average bear'), but I like the happy feeling you gave to it with his 'going against the grain' attitude and enjoying being out in the snow instead of opting for greener pastures like other bears.
Methinks he might be a bear of the Polar variety! *Laugh*
A 'parable poem', eh? Makes sense! Thanks for teaching me that! *Thumbsupl*
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