Hi Maudlin,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of devotion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is hopelessly in love with a very violent person. I am hoping that the speaker can find a way out of this obviously very destructive relationship. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well dome and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.