Hi Salt&Pepper'sLonely'sClub,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about being as kind and helpful as you can to others and not making their troubles worse. I try to help as much as I can. It hurts me to see someone else hurt or in trouble. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.